Hi George, I think as a year 6 you need more than one sentence for your reflection/explanation and I also think you should include what the video is about. There is one thing you also need to include but before I tell you ... Where is the video? So you need to include the video because you said " click here to watch" but people won't know where to click. Keep up the good work.
Hi George,
ReplyDeleteI think as a year 6 you need more than one sentence for your reflection/explanation and I also think you should include what the video is about. There is one thing you also need to include but before I tell you ... Where is the video? So you need to include the video because you said " click here to watch" but people won't know where to click. Keep up the good work.
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